There is good writing and bad writing. Some people like Shakespeare, others like Dashell Hammett. Personally, outside of "The Old Man and the Sea" we do not care for Hemingway. Writing, like cuisine, is in the eye of the beholder. McDonalds for some, Per Se and Eleven Madison Park for us.
But no lawyer wants to see this in the start of an opinion in McCurry v. Kenco, from the Seventh Circuit:
We affirm. McCurry doesn’t challenge the judge’s decision to enforce the local summary-judgment rule. As a result, and unsurprisingly, the uncontested record contains no evidence to support a viable discrimination or conspiracy claim. Indeed, the appeal is utterly frivolous and McCurry’s monstrosity of an appellate brief is incoherent, so we also order her lawyer, Jordan T. Hoffman, to show cause why he should not be sanctioned or otherwise disciplined under Rules 28 and 38 of the Federal Rules of Appellate Procedure.
"Surely you jest Rumpole. It cannot be that bad", you say. We report- you decide:
McCurry’s response to the defendants’ motions... was instead a disorganized, rambling, hard-to-decipher mess.
"But what about the arguments in the brief, Rumpole? Surely they must have had some legal merit?"
Well, in what may be a first in US jurisprudence, the brief did not have (steady now) ...an arguments section!!
Although McCurry did not include an argument section in her brief, her arguments were scattered randomly throughout her 62-page response, in probable violation of Local Rule 7.1(D)(5), which (by crossreference to Rule 7.1(B)(4)) limits the argument section of a response brief to 15 pages or 7,000 words.
And file this part of the opinion under the "tell us how you really feel judge" file:
Her appellate arguments are insubstantial to the point of incoherence and had no chance of prevailing in this court. “The result has been the harassment of opposing parties, insult to judicial officers, and waste of limited and valuable judicial resources.”
And now to the fun part:
The patently frivolous nature of this appeal isn’t the only thing that troubles us. The hopelessness of McCurry’s cause didn’t deter her lawyer, Jordan Hoffman, from signing and submitting a bizarre appellate brief laden with assertions that have no basis in the record and arguments that have no basis in the law.
McCurry’s brief, which spans 86 interminable pages, is neither concise nor clear. It is chock-full of impenetrable arguments and unsupported assertions, and it is organized in ways that escape our understanding. Here is a representative sample:
The brief includes a section entitled “GAMESMANSHIP ,” which contains the following assertion: “Defendants have been ‘gaming’ the system.” There is nothing else in the “gamesmanship” section.
The brief contains many sentences like this one (all errors in original): McCurry experiences a change in fringe benefits; harsher scrutiny; failure to be promoted; lack of opportunities; lack of professional standing; economic sanctions; hostile work environment that led to an employee being shot on the premise, various verbal and physical assaults of AfricanAmericans by Caucasian employees of use of gun violence, vehicular assault, amongst other forms of violence, the ever looming threat that a racially motivated altercation or riot may ensue and physical damage to McCurry’s auto amongst actions/activities/ conduct.
This just hurts:
There is more, but the point is made. Bad writing does not normally warrant sanctions, but we draw the line at gibberish
And this hurts even more:
Because we have a duty to “maintain public confidence in the legal profession” and “protect the integrity of the judicial proceeding,” Doe v. Nielsen, 883 F.3d 716, 718 (7th Cir. 2018) (quotation marks omitted), we confronted Hoffman about his brief at oral argument. He replied that he is a “solo practitioner” who tries “to get the help of … clients and whoever can provide help to [him]” and then “merge[s] that information.” Whatever that means, it in no way excuses this unprofessional conduct.
Rumpole. who routinely rejects all proffered help from clients and the "whoevers" of the world, says: "OUCH!" And we don't really merge information. If anything, we fight the merging of information by big brother, amongst others.
FN 4 of the opinion is the cherry on the sundae:
4 He signed the brief on behalf of “plaintiff-appellant Mary Madison,” who is not a party in this case. This is yet another way in which the brief is “out of the ordinary.”
The whole, scathing, scalding opinion is here for your perusal:
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